Messed Up Recount|Paragraph Linking

LI: To correct certain structure and language features in a recount./LI: To evaluate writing samples using the PBS writing rubric. This week for writing we had to fix a messed up recount. JK Rowling had to organise ideas, Stephan King had to do sentence structure, Dr. Seuss had to do paragraph structure and Dr. Dahl had to do paragraph linking. Mr. Wong told us what we had to do for the paragraph linking and more. Then we had to go on the messed up recount. My group and I had to do paragraph linking. We had to highlight the text if we changed the sentences. Paragraph linking is when the ending of a paragraph links with the topic sentence of the next paragraph. We do paragraph linking by changing the topic sentence to connect with the ending of the paragraph before.