Summer Learning Journey|Comment 1

LI: To comment on blogs. This week for Summer Learning Journey I decided to comment. I commented on Miiana's blog. Miiana was doing activity 2 of day 1 for the Summer Learning Journey. To me I think that Miiana did a great job at this activity. I had lots of fun commenting on Miiana's blog.
Here is the link- Miiana's Blog

Commenting

LI: To learn how to smart comment. This week for commenting I decided to comment on Alayah's blog. The blogpost that I commented on was "Perfect Tenses". I think Alayah did a great job. The connection we made was that we both did perfect tenses. I liked the way Alayah added two paragraphs in her blurb and also a DLO of the perfect tenses. The advice that I gave her was that she should check her sentences before publishing. I had a lot of fun commenting on Alayah's blog.
Here is the link- Alayah's Blog

Commenting

This week for commenting I decided to comment on Farzana's blog. The blog post that I commented on was subtraction. I think Farzana did a fantastic job. I thought that Farzana's blurb explained what she did for maths which was good. I liked the way she added a video of subtraction. I learnt a lot from the video. I had fun commenting on Farzana's blog. Here is the link- Farzana's Blog

Commenting

This week for commenting I decided to comment on Charlize's blog. The connection we made was that we both went boxing. I think Charlize did awesome work. I thought that in Charlize's blurb he explained what she did for boxing which was very good. I liked the way Charlize explained how he felt and how she had fun. I also liked he way she wrote down the three commandments and what she had to say. Here is the link- Charlize's blog

Commenting

This week for commenting I decided to comment on Chris's blog. The blog post that I commented on was Max Gimblett. I think that Chris did a fantastic job. I liked the way he added his own LI and how he added a DLO to show what he did. I also liked the way he explained what he did in his blurb.  I thought that Chris's quatrefoils looked cool. I wanted to know if Chris had fun digitally drawing designs on the quatrefoils. Here is the link- Chris's Blog

Film Festival Commenting

LI: To comment on school's manaiakalani film festival movies. This week we had to comment on a school's manaiakalani film festival movie. I decided to comment on Tamaki College's movie. The movie that I commented on was called Services Academy Induction Camp. This movie was about doing camp activities and working together to finish the activities. I had a lot of fun watching the movie. Here is the link- Tamaki College Services Academy Induction Camp

Commenting

This week for commenting I decided to comment on Bella's blog. The blog post that I commented on was Kiwi Can. I think that Bella did a amazing job. I liked the way Bella added her own LI: for kiwi can. I liked the way she added a DLO and how she added photos. I also liked the way she explained what she did for kiwi can in her blurb. Here is the link- Bella's Blog

Commenting

This week for commenting I decided to comment on Andrew's blog. The blog post that I commented on was the conflict and resolution blog post. I think Andrew did a great job. I liked the way Andrew added a LI: and how he added a DLO of what he did. I also liked the way he explained what he did for reading and the connection he made with the story. I just wanted know if Andrew found it easy to do the reading task.

Commenting

This week for commenting I decided to comment on Karlos's blog. The connection that we made was that we both did the reading task. I think Karlos did a fantastic job. I liked the way he explained what he did for reading and how he added a LI:. I also liked the way he added a DLO of what he did and a story that was similar to the story Spark. I just wanted to know if Karlos found it hard to do the reading task. I had fun commenting.

Commenting

This week for commenting I decided to comment on Chris's blog. The blog post that I commented on was Emotive Language. I think that Chris did a amazing job. I liked the way he explained what he did in his blurb. I also liked the way Chris added a poster about emotive language. I wanted to know if he found it easy to create the poster about emotive language, because to me it was easy.

Commenting

This week for commenting I decided to comment on Florence's blog. The blog post that I commented on was Presentation | Video | Urban Planning | Inquiry. I think that Florence did a fantastic job at doing the inquiry blog post. I liked the way Florence added a video of the task she did for inquiry. I also liked the way she added links to the games she played that was related to the topic and also I liked the way she explained what she did in her blurb. I just wanted to know if she had fun playing the games. Here is the link- Florence's blog

Commenting

This week for commenting I decided to comment on Nicole's blog. The blog post that I commented on was Swimming at YMCA lagoon pools. I think that Nicole did a awesome job at doing a blog post about swimming. The connections we had was that I went swimming too. I like the way Nicole added a photo that shows a demonstration of a swimming skill she did and learnt. I also like the way she explained what she did at the YMCA pools. I wanted to know if Nicole had fun swimming. I had a lot of fun commenting on Nicole's blog. Here is the link- Nicole's Blog

Commenting

This week for commenting I decided to comment on Bella's blog. The blog post that I commented on was Different Angles Sheet. I think that Bella did a good job. The connection that Bella and I had was that we both measured angles using a protractor. I liked the way Bella added a LI. I also liked the way she explained what she did and what she learnt. I just wanted to know if she found it hard to measure angles with a protractor because I kind of did. 

Commenting

This week for commenting I decided to comment on Fau's blog. The blog post that I commented on Bridges from around the world|Google Maps. I think that Fau did a fantastic job at doing the inquiry task. The connection that we made was that we both did this inquiry task. I like the way Fau explained what she did for the inquiry task. I also like the way she explained what she did in her blurb. I just wanted to know if Fau had fin learning about bridges. Here is the link- Fau's Blog

Commenting

This week for commenting I decided to comment on Chris's blog. The blog post that I commented on was Tengu's Lessons. The connection Chris and I had was that we both did the reading task. I think that Chris did a fantastic job at doing the reading task. I liked the way he explained what he did for the reading task. I also liked the way he made a DLO that teached us the lessons of tengu and a summary of some of the tengu stories. The question that I asked was that if he had fun reading different stories of tengu. Here is the link- Chris's Blog

Commenting

This week for commenting I decided to comment on Chris's blog. The blog post that I commented on was Adding Fractions. The connection we had was that I did the same maths task. I liked the way he added a DLO of what he did. I also like the way he explained what he did. I just wanted to know if he found it easy adding fractions. I think that Chris did a amazing job. Here is the link- Chris's blog

Commenting

This week I decided to comment on Chris's blog. The blog post that I commented on was Silent Red Book|Dialogue & Monologue. The connection that I made was that we both did the writing task. I like the way he explained what he did. I also liked the way he put a DLO of what he did. I think Chris did a awesome job. I had a lot of fun commenting on Chris's blog. Here is the link- Chris's blog

Commenting

This week for commenting I decided to comment on Lukah's blog. The blog post that I commented on was Cat (MRS. GREN). The connection that we had was that I did the task too. I like the way Lukah added a LI. I like the way he added a video of what he did. I also like the way he explained what he did. I just wanted to know if he had fun recording the video. I had a lot of fun commenting on Lukah's blog. Here is the link- Lukah's Blog

Commenting

This week for commenting I decided to comment on Chris's blog. The blog post that I commented on was Compulsory Tasks. I think Chris did a awesome job at doing the blog post. I liked the way he added the tasks he did with his group. I also liked the way he explained what he did and what he learnt. I really like the way he added his own learning intention/LI. I wanted to know if he had fun doing the tasks. I had fun commenting on Chris's blog. Here is the link- Chris's blog

Commenting

This week for commenting I decided to comment on Lukah's blog. The blog post that I commented on was Kiwi Can. I liked the way he created his own LI and that he explained what he did at kiwi can. I really liked the way he added a image of what he did at kiwi can. I wanted to know if he had fun at Kiwi Can. I think that Lukah did a fantastic job at doing a blog post. I enjoyed writing a comment on Lukah's blog. Here is the link- Lukah's Blog