LI: To compare explanations with information reports. This week for writing we had to write a ten sentence explanation about how aluminium cans are made. First Mr. Wong gave did examples of a ten sentence explanation and a information report. The explanation and the information report was about how Venus fly traps work and facts about Venus fly traps. Once Mr. Wong showed us the examples we had to watch a video about how aluminium cans are made .We then had to make a copy of a google doc. We needed to write down the planning. For the google doc we had to write down a ten sentence explanation about how aluminium cans are made. We needed to include the title, the introduction, the explanation and the conclusion. We did a ten sentence explanation because last week when we did a full explanation about the nervous system, our explanations turned out to be a information report. A explanation and a information report is different from each other because a explanation tells people about how something works and why it happens and a information report tells people about facts about a subject.
Good explanation, Sakina.
ReplyDeleteYour introduction has told the reader that they are going to read about aluminium cans and that it takes many steps to make them.
How has your conclusion summarised your explanation and linked to another topic?
Which of your sentences are simple sentences? Which are compound? Which are complex?