Narrative Checking

LI:To buddy conference to start to edit and check writing

For writing I learnt to work with a buddy and check each other’s writing work. We also had to comment what we should change, write or delete. The narrative we had to write is about Jack, Jill and the monster. I learnt it by getting into a partner and checking each other's narrative work. I was working with Jack. For Jack’s work I added 6 comments for him to fix, so that his writing narrative was more better. To check other people's narrative you actually have to look through slowly to find things .