Thursday, 25 May 2017

Letter to Once-ler


To the Once-ler by the  Lorax



Dear Once-ler

Please do not cut down truffula trees. If you do, can you just take out the seeds and plant new trees. You should also not put oil from your machine in the pond because the humming fish won’t be able hum anymore. When you cut down the trees, the animals won’t have anything to eat or even live in. Just because you use trees to make your thneeds, why can’t you use empty packets or plastic bottles to make your thneeds? Did you know when there aren’t any truffula trees you and your family or other people will be sick . They won’t have any medicine for them to feel better. The animals will hate you because of what you did to them. Your families will also hate you too, then one day nearly everyone will hate you. Can you at least bring back the animals by planting trees and making houses for the animals. That way the animals will like you again and your family too. If you do all these things it could make a change to the planet.

LI:To Persuade using reduce,reuse,recycle arguments
I learnt to know how to convince people to do the right thing.I also learnt how to tell someone to reduce,reuse and recycle.
I learnt it by being in partners then writing  letter to the Once-ler.My partner gave me some ideas of what we should write,so that we could convince the Once-ler to stop doing bad stuff.I also learnt it by doing a plan then starting with the story because that way when we don’t do the plan some of us won’t know what to write.By learning reduce,reuse and recycle my teachers told me what it means.
































































































































































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