I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teacher is Mrs Anderson.
Hi Sakina,Great post, I love the review you made. I love the story Smile, I think it's very interesting. Your sentences make sense, but where's your blurb? Next time you could maybe add a blurb explaining your review. What is your favorite part of the story?
Okay and Thank you
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Hi Sakina,
ReplyDeleteGreat post, I love the review you made. I love the story Smile, I think it's very interesting. Your sentences make sense, but where's your blurb? Next time you could maybe add a blurb explaining your review. What is your favorite part of the story?
Okay and Thank you
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