I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teacher is Mrs Anderson.
Friday, 23 September 2016
Thursday, 15 September 2016
Ask Eddie
This story is about the whole class going to kora and then the kids draw a picture to see who’s picture is the best.The class goes to the kora and the old man says that Eddies picture is the best. The person who draws the best picture takes it to the kora.After that the class goes to the kora and the man chooses Eddies picture because his one was the best and Eddies picture was for the kora.
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Reading
Summary of Animals' Wishes
At the start of the story there was a maker who created animals and gave them wishes.Then the maker gave wishes to the rabbit because he was good .After that there was a rude owl who interrupted the maker from giving the rabbit its wishes.The maker got really angry so he gave the rude owl wishes but it wasn’t the wishes that the rude owl wanted.Finally the rabbit got sad because the maker didn’t finish off the rabbit's front legs so he could run fast.
Today I learnt how to do a Summary.I had to tell you about the begining,middle and the end.The story I did was Animals' Wishes.
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Writing
Tuesday, 13 September 2016
Narrative
Planning
Setting:Dunkirk Park
Characters:Victoria and I
Conflict:Kidnapped
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“The weathers great today,”I said.The sun is shining like a crystal and I feel like the trees talking to each other.
“Can you stop talking about the weather and the trees,”moans Victoria.”Hey I have an idea. We could play soccer.The one with the most scores gets chocolate.Is that fair?”
“Um….. let me think,”I said.”Fair.”
“Then let’s play,”Victoria said happily. “Yay!I got 5 goals I win.I’m going to get my chocolate.”
When Victoria got her chocolate she suddenly suffocated because she had her shoulder bag around her.
“Help! Someones got me,”shouts Victoria.
“Victoria where are you,”I shout.
I panicked .I didn't want to lose my best friend.
I was so scared she might get killed.I stood up and started looking for her.I couldn’t see any sign of her.Suddenly something popped out of my head.I tracked her with my phone.I saw a house that said come and get me.It was very creepy.I found Victoria outside the house.I quickly cut the rope with my hand and took of the ducttape on Victoria mouth.
“Don’t talk,”I said quietly.I’m gonna get you out of here.Once we got out I took Victoria back to the park.
“You're the best,”said Victoria. “Thank you for bringing me back.I was really scared.”
“Let’s go home.” I say. “This park is dangerous.I’m not coming back here anymore.”
“Totally.” agrees Victoria.
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Writing
Monday, 12 September 2016
Sunday, 11 September 2016
Starting with strings
Today I read a book starting with string.I had tell you how to use a Violin.
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Reading
Nonsense poem
I took a photo with a
phone
and told an elephant
to crash
the phone because
he was to
annoying!!
phone
and told an elephant
to crash
the phone because
he was to
annoying!!
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Creative thinking
Friday, 9 September 2016
Using place value to subtract 2 digit numbers
Today I was learning how to use place value to subtract 2 digit numbers.
Wednesday, 7 September 2016
Nana's house
“Yay I’m finally at nana’s house.I’m excited to be visiting nana.Nana’s cottage is always dirty.
“Ahh spiders have made their homes in the windows.” I say to myself.I’m always scared of spiders.Grandma has a beautiful flower garden, and she always cares about them.The grass in her backyard has grown long.Dad should come roung to do her lawns.
“Knock knock.I hear grandma shuffling her feet.Nana opens the door and hugs me really tightly.
“Hi grandma it’s good to see you again.
“Hi dear you’ve grown up.Grandma wears black round glasses and her hugs are always warm.
When nana got inside her house she suddenly tripped off Toby.
“Oh no nana. Are you ok.Nana broke her leg really badly.I quickly called 111 and yelled for help.
I opened the door and waited outside,so the ambulance could come.Two people came in and took grandma to the hospital.I called my mum to come and pick me up.I told mum that nana’s leg is broken.I got in mum’s car and we went home.
“I hope nana will be ok.
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Writing
Using place value to add 2 digit numbers
Today I was learning how to use place value to add 2 digit numbers.
Tuesday, 6 September 2016
Beating the clock
Monday, 5 September 2016
Using addition instead of subtraction
Today I was learning how to use addition instead of subtraction.It was easy to use addition instead of subtration.
Chester:Main ideas
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Main Idea
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Supporting Sentences
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Chester my new puppy.
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Chester in the garden.
Chester at night
Chester at dog school.
Dog competition
Chester wins
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He jumps to give the boy wet sloppy kisses.
He howls in the basement.
He gives sloppy kisses.
He stays for twelve Saturdays.
He learned how to sit,stay,fetch,roll over,lie down,shake hands and to to what he was told.
Chester ran through hoops,jumped over small walls,sniffed out handkerchief on small walls,fetched a ball from a pond,zigzagged around poles and lay down.
He got a red ribbon and a plastic bone.He barked and jumped up and kissed mum and the boy.
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Reading
The park (FW)
When I went the park I see tall trees.I see the slide is stuck on the tree some kids playing on the park.I hear babies crying because they want a lot of food.I feel leaves falling on my head and trees tickling me.I smell the fresh air and people putting on perfume.I taste people’s yuck medicine..I also saw a lot of people going on the swings and the slides.The slide was slimy like slime.Some kids were building sand castles,but one person rowened the sand castle.Some people were sitting on the bench because they were tired.One tree wad taller than the other 2 trees.There was a lot of kids that wanted to go on the swings.There was a big as bench.The sand felt cold and smooth.I went to the bushes because I wanted to spy on the people.I saw shoes on the slide.So I got it and tried to find that person who lost there shoes.I found the girls shoes.Then I gave the shoes to the girl called Emma.
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Writing
The Polar bear (FW)
It was a snowy day.A polar bear wanted to be someone’s friend.Me and my friends Victoria,Charmaine and Marie went to Antarctica because in New Zealand there wasn’t any snow, so we went to Antarctica.We wore heaps of clothes because it would be very cold.So we went there and there was an polar bear so we all tried to hide behind something. The polar bear would talk.He said can I be your friend I don’t have anyone to be my friend.We all said ok.We all went on the polar bears back one at a time.Then we all got some snow and made it into a ball.We went behind the polar bear and throwed snow at him.Victoria went on the polar bears back and lead her somewhere.Me,Charmaine and Marie went with Victoria.The polar bear lead us to a igloo.He said to come inside so we don’t get cold.It was warm inside it.After we slept for a while we went back to New Zealand.We said goodbye to the polar bear.Polar bear said goodbye back.We missed polar bear.
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Writing
Using correct punctuation
"Here we are at last,” moaned Matthew.
“It’s a great place,” said mum.
“I hope it has wifi because I want to watch John Cena.”
“You’ll be lucky.We will be busy doing lot's of activities,”mum said.
“This is not my idea of a holiday,”Matthew moan.
Today I was learning how to use correct punctuation. Mrs Prasad had to write us a short paragraph. We then had to highlight all the punctuation in red.
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Writing
Sunday, 4 September 2016
Practicing my division
Thursday, 1 September 2016
Making sentences out of words
Usually-I usually come school on time because I wake up early.
Anyone-If anyone annoys me I will tell the teacher on duty.
Quickly-Whenever it’s home time I run quickly to the car.
Sometimes-Sometimes I go to my cousins house.
Children-The children in kindergarten makes some noises.
Either-I either stay at my house or my cousins house.
Because-I like going shopping because it’s fun going inside the stores and buying things. Weather-The weather outside is sunny.
Heavy-The big tables are heavy.
Build-My dad builded a house for my dog Red.
Anyone-If anyone annoys me I will tell the teacher on duty.
Quickly-Whenever it’s home time I run quickly to the car.
Sometimes-Sometimes I go to my cousins house.
Children-The children in kindergarten makes some noises.
Either-I either stay at my house or my cousins house.
Because-I like going shopping because it’s fun going inside the stores and buying things. Weather-The weather outside is sunny.
Heavy-The big tables are heavy.
Build-My dad builded a house for my dog Red.
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